Daily Archives: March 26, 2015

Each time we plan our writing, we need to consider 1.the text type and 2.the audience. To make sure we did this, we read our narratives about #belonging to our Prep buddies.

The learning intention for today's reading was to make sure our narratives were suitable for our intended audience (the Preps). To check that we are great authors, the Preps gave us feedback. They had to tell us one thing that was great about our text and one thing that needed to be improved.

Some of the positive things they shared about our writing were:

"That was a great story."

"This story reminds me of what happens in my family."

"Your story makes sense."

"Your writing was very neat and it was a good story about belonging."

Some improvements they told us that will help us as authors were:

"You need to leave more space between the illustration and the writing."

"If you do clearer pictures it will make it even better."

"Don't write your words and then colour over it. It makes it hard to read."

Here are a few pictures of us reading our #narratives to our Prep buddies...

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Thanks for letting us read to you today Prep buddies and thanks for helping us to be better #authors.